Can you roast our landing page?
Hi everyone!
Working on a plug-and-play loyalty & gamification engine for mobile apps (with an optional token layer).
Thinking about our first PH launch, but still unsure about our landing page and value description.
What do you think about the page? Does the value prop land? Would you care?
Any feedback is much appreciated!
Website: https://enable3.io/
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Exciting project! The landing page has a modern feel but simplifying the language could make it more accessible. Avoiding jargon and focusing on clear benefits will resonate better with a broader audience.
@fatima_sarki Thank you for the feedback
Hi Andrii,
It's a really sleek landing page and strong overall. The other comments are good suggestions, I would just add as a specific example that 'web3 loyalty' is presenting a feature with the 'how' and not the 'what'. Even a solution as simple as flipping the phrase so that you lead with 'offer digital ownership through web3 loyalty plans.'
Ultimately, your customers are buying your solution because it lets them launch loyalty programs without technical expertise or resources, so the language on your LP should reflect that.
This is all assuming this is for users and not investors, of course :) nice job! Excited to see it.
@cholden_lewis Holden, appreciate the input! Agree that some of the core messages should be re-framed for better understanding.
@cholden_lewis Happy to help in return!