Manu Goel

"Don't Sell. Solve Problems" -- Need feedback on our tagline

MarketFit is launching soon.

I thought what would be a better forum than PH to get some feedback on our tagline.

We are evaluating 2 options but open to others too.

1) "Don't Sell. Solve Problems"

2) "Sales AI: Don't Sell. Solve Problems"

3) (think of something other tagline)

Much appreciate if you could give a feedback by mentioning 1,2,3 and maybe suggest a tagline if 3...we would be super grateful.

For quick reference: https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit

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Sanooj Surendranath
  1. Serve, don't sell.

  2. Sales AI: Solutions over sales.

Manu Goel
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@sanoojs thanks!
Olga Shiryaeva

I'd go with Option 2 since "Sales AI" immediately clarifies what type of tool this is.

A couple of suggestions on the current copy:

  • "Sales guys" could be more inclusive - consider "sales teams" or "sales professionals" instead.

  • The phrase "Does only what matters most to [sales professionals]" doesn't clearly communicate what the product actually does. I can see it's sales-related, but the specific problem it solves isn't obvious from the description.

Manu Goel
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@olga_shiryaeva1 thanks a lot for your suggestions. Somehow I thought (from what I see around ) that guys is now used as a common term but seems I am wrong. I will surely correct that and the second point too. Your feedback is much appreciated. Thanks a lot
Olga Shiryaeva

@manu_goel2Glad it was helpful! You're partially right about the "guys" comment - it has become more casual. I just think it's always safer to use inclusive language in marketing copy since you never know who's reading and what their experiences are. Thanks for being so open to feedback!

@manu_goel2 Smarter selling starts with solving.

Manu Goel
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@ninaaaa0913 👍thanks
Elly
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Could you tell me a little more about your product? I don't have a good idea of what the product is from the tagline~.

Manu Goel
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@elly_sp Sure Elly. Please check here https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit or at our website ... marketfit.mgimpacts.com Thanks for reaching out.